I'm currently outlining a sequel to "Let Sleeping Foxes Lie." Normally I don't go to a lot of hassle with outlining since I don't expect to stick to them anyways, but I think this plot might require it and also I'm trying to avoid the 'I finished that scene, where do I go now' moments I had working on "Fire and Wind."
Also, at some point I'm going to go back over the original story and give it another revision pass. I'm going to fix some basic mechanical stuff I know slipped through and iron out a little continuity wrinkle that crept in. Out of those folks who actually read
the original, whether as I posted it serially or in collected form afterwards, does anyone have any suggestions for anything major I should look at?