Before I get to the story, I'd like to share this: Dave Carroll has posted the third part of his "United Breaks Guitars" song/video trilogy.
And now we get around to the story. (And make sure to check out the Free Fiction Friday offerings of
vaughn_r_demont and
id_locke.)
It's worth noting that as of this week, I've hit the end of the material that my beta readers got a chance to see. So after this week, it'll be all new material.
While I'm revising and posting the rest of the story after this, I'll be sorely tempted to include a reference here and there to changes I made, just to test the beta readers and see if they've just been skimming this so far or reading it anew. ;)
( Let Sleeping Foxes Lie, Part 12 )
And now we get around to the story. (And make sure to check out the Free Fiction Friday offerings of
It's worth noting that as of this week, I've hit the end of the material that my beta readers got a chance to see. So after this week, it'll be all new material.
While I'm revising and posting the rest of the story after this, I'll be sorely tempted to include a reference here and there to changes I made, just to test the beta readers and see if they've just been skimming this so far or reading it anew. ;)
( Let Sleeping Foxes Lie, Part 12 )